Wednesday, December 1, 2010

The Mystery House

For school, Makenna had an assignment to write a story about a mystery house. It was supposed to be 3 sentences, but Makenna "loves" to write, so she added a bit more. I just love reading stories written by kids. It is so amazing to see their thought process. I retyped the story as she wrote it:


The door opined by it's self. I woked in. Evry thing was moving. I went up sters. Wen I got up sters the sters thrnd in to a slide. I ran in to the klosit as fast as I can. There was a gost in the klosit! I ran out of the klosit. I ran done the sters. The dor was shut. I thrid to opin the dore. It was locked. The gost was chasing me. wen he got up to me he seid BOO! I ran and klimed up the up the chimny and nevr went in the mystery House ugen!

Great story Makenna! Love the suspense!


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